grey ghost

i reallly liked this poem. i cant punctuate for beans, so i cant really say anything about that. last stanza was by far my favorite. what goes inside your head ...

don't mean to bash on your views,but i have to on this one. we aren't killing innocent civilians over there. we are killing terrorists. the terrorists are the ones killing ...

I think this peice was fairly good. not the best, but good. It provided interesting facts but they didnot really back up your writing. Also, I got kinda off board ...

I like it. unlike most people, I enjoy what is mysterious, what is confusing, and what is strange. Haikus are great for that. Also, I gotsta disagree with hamerkid, I ...